Imperfect Collection of Atoms

12 11 2008

I am an imperfect collection of atoms,

cellular mass with regular irregularities.

My body is flawed from misplaced fibers in my hair to each and every mole on my skin.

I am imperfect in many actions undertaken,

from every lie ever uttered to every act of selfishness repeated.

Don’t build me up to be something I’m not.

I am no living legend no savior for the meek.

I create art as long as there are those to perceive it.

I’m as flawed as every other being born from a womb.

So let us liberate each other with our imperfections,

let your pain be mine to sooth and my fear be silenced by your reassurances,

let my imperfect hands caress your imperfect cheacks,

so perfectly because though we are a tangled storm of atoms in constant motion,

our chemistry harmonizes and I don’t have to be perfect,

just a man, no more no less.


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5 responses

12 11 2008
fishydog

hey ryan, your writings are evolving into something real beautiful =)

12 11 2008
shortnmorose

i echo cheryl. echoooo echoooo

13 11 2008
K. Sao

nice piece – ur words r really strong on this… this here is fire:
“though we are a tangled storm of atoms in constant motion…”

13 11 2008
guavaisgood

reminds me of the last bit of “eternal sunshine of the spotless mind”

“I’M NOT PERFECT! and, I NEVER WILL BE!”
“…that’s okay”

Expectations are a deadliest weapon in any relationship–it’s best to leave it alone and assume both don’t know what the hell they are doing in the first place.

13 11 2008
vicky_luu

very nice, my friend.

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